Black Poetry : what's my next move?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sraheem2, Mar 19, 2002.

  1. sraheem2

    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****, it's late at night and here we go again....


    what do I do now?
    you hold the cards
    and you play them well

    you were trump tight
    from the start
    how could you NOT know
    you've always had
    my heart?

    got me sleepless
    and when I finally
    fall, mercifully
    there are no dreams
    at all

    I walk through
    those on a daily
    in a trance
    I'm dangling like a puppet
    doing your dance

    what's my next move?
    I don't know this game
    or at least, not your version
    you had me thinking
    that you thought
    I had you in check

    but your ****'s so cold
    you sent the princess
    to rope the king's.... neck

    that's some hellafied "mate"

    **** baby, what's next?

    (btw, there will be a wake for
    the queen on Friday)

    what is left of me
    that you should still care?
    (but that you do is my nightly prayer)

    my moves were meant
    to save us,
    not to destroy
    and the truth was the only
    tool I could employ

    I couldn't win
    yet I had to choose
    I calculated the high risk
    and the trust I would lose

    so tell me dammit!
    what's my next move?


    s
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welllllll


    a
     
  3. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep scribe here!!

    Thanks for sharing!!:rolleyes:
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, I likes this flow as well!!!

    Welcome!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    this was tight

    i like your style ;)

    pd
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 off da hook here ...wow
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like how the words laid seem as calculated as the game played. Tyte flow.
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa now. An oldie but a goodie. Thanks for bringin it back, $$RICH$$ness.
     
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