Black Poetry : What's Love? Peaches & Cream?

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  1. Olorun1

    Olorun1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHAT'S LOVE, PEACHES & CREAM ?

    What’s love ?
    Peaches & Cream?
    And so it seems

    Sitting in this train car - amidst a slew of cold stares
    While pondering without any care
    Is divine justice any fare?

    Shoes untied, - standing bare
    A poor soul appears
    Crying and begging in despair
    "A quarter, a dime, any change will be just fine''

    Again the question dares
    What’s love ? - Peaches & Cream ?
    Or simply a sweet smile
    From an unknown fare who cares .

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    J.S

    :toast: :heart: :love: :kiss: :luv:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!
    i like dis here
    fancy fare of love
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this
    nice flow
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..........I truly loved this...

    as in LOVE - meaning (an unknown fare who cares / not peaches n' cream)

    this really touched me..........deeply
     
  5. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice projection of feeling in this piece.
     
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    very nice
    your flow
    different flavor
    like how
    compose your
    flow
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  7. Olorun1

    Olorun1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your kind words are my blessings

    MUCH RESPECT

    PEACE
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a VERY nice piece...
     
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