Quiet Poetry Lounge : what's in the word

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Caesarlee31, Jun 2, 2004.

  1. Caesarlee31

    Caesarlee31 Active Member MEMBER

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    When I met love, I did not
    want to know her, see her, be near her.
    She, spoke a language that angered me caused me
    to remember loves past and those loved before
    i.e she made me crazy so much that I fired love from
    loves job and moved in with love,
    just to make sure love knew how crazy loves love made me.
    I couldn't stand to see another man be close to love because
    love should be thinking of ways to appologise to me for making
    life so unbarable with out love, no matter how many day I rent the room for,
    talking smart on telephones conjuring company to further
    exploit my on going obsession with being in love with love and I don't know what to do?????
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love can take us all on a twist of fate or bring us to
    memories of it's past so felt scribe ...tyte drop
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi and welcome aboard,
    That was so cute, I like the way you expressed your love for your love. very nice piece...keep the pen in motion.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so cleverly written...
    wow...
    love that line...

    wonderful scribe...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love can have us coming and going at the same time, this is for sure. This was posed masterfully.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HI:wave:
    feeling that lost in love
    kind of flow
    yeah
    love can have
    so many dimension
    nice flow
    looking forward to feeling
    your flows more
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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