Black Poetry : What's going on in your mind?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Oct 9, 2001.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you have an itch that you can't seem to scratch.
    do you need that special touch
    you know the one that tugs at you through the night
    that makes you sweat
    makes you wet
    have you dreaming thoughts you shouldn't be dreaming
    thinking of people you thought you had let go
    do you smell their essence when they are not around
    do you instinctively call out their name
    do you envision them going to those deep places
    where the waterfalls
    do you think your thirst will ever be quenched
    is there a fountain that you wish to drink from
    but the sign says you are not allowed
    does it make you crave that water all the more
    do you lick your lips anticipating the taste
    are you tempted to remove the sign if only for a little while
    can you be satisfied and then get on with your life
    isn't it tempting thinking that you can
    but deep down you know
    that you will become more addicted than you already are
    no 12 step program to kick this habit
    just flow with it
    and see where it takes you
    is that what runs through your mind?
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Bish - you broke this down dun nice work here you took it deep on a playa type status


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!!! BISHOP

    ya broke it down extremely smooveeeeee!!!
    man madd skillz flowin' in the house of lights:cool:
     
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