Black Poetry : Whats done can't be undone

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, May 17, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What's done

    Can't be undone

    Every cut has to bleed

    Every bruise has to swell

    Every hurtful word will be heard

    What's done

    Can't be undone

    All the pain in my heart

    And the scratches on my soul

    Time does not travel backwards

    What goes up must come down

    The simple laws

    Of life and love

    Can never be reversed

    With "I'm sorry"
     
  2. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sorry?

    <condenses into a solid and falls to the floor as rain>

    Very true. Sorry is just a word. That spills quickly from the mouth of the guilty. There are many things that sorry just cannot live up to or replace or even smooth over.
    True sorrow is an action as well as a word. It is an expression that is born within the heart and soul.

    Once again, thanks for the thoughts.

    peace&1luv,
    Legendof_1_Spirit

    <evaporates into the night>
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something happened, something hurt, sorry if really meant, helps, but does not erase pain endured. This was a direct hit.
     
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