Black Poetry : WHATEVER.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jul 5, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last laugh how do it make you feel
    I aint got ish
    Thas your joy
    But I am better then you by….
    My faith
    My pride
    And being the woman I am
    It’s a VICTORY, how ever you see it
    You can never take it away..not this time
    As you tried in ya little warp mind
    Control by force or by mind
    I laid to long…..
    Selfish……son of…..
    Killing my joy taken my dreams
    Trying to play a daddy’s role
    When a black woman raised me
    I watch her fight and struggle
    To have better for me
    And this is not how
    I wish to remember her name
    Or her fight
    By playing your games
    I release myself from you
    Vanish out my life
    Step on keep moving
    I am free
    I will rise
    Watch me
    I like when you doubt me
    For one you don’t know
    Heaven or hell
    Because it was hell for me
    Pretending I could live when I was died…inside
    I maybe down now but it have to get rough
    In this storm for me to walk over your sorry ……
    You or no one else will be my fall
    So kiss my…….
    Take it all to the bank
    Cuz yours just sank….
    Two faced hatin son of a……
    You got one off now watch me
    As I rise in my own
    And do my thang
    You can’t touch this
    But you wish you could
    Twisted mind playing a game
    That left you in the wind
    Momma didn’t raise no fool
    But I have to show you as I
    Grow strong
    stronger
    From all the abuse I had under your hand
    You set a loose the demons child
    Little did you know I was stronger then you
    Told ya……momma didn’t raise no fool
    Step
    …….step
    …………….get to steppin
    and do us both a favor don’t look back
    because I will RISE……with out a thought of you

    Mary had a little lamb.
    But she let him go
    And she was just fine

    (C) 2004
    A BlackAngel production
    of My Thang
    WHATEVER...
     
  2. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew!!!!
    dang' Angel, I'm glad I aint that dude...

    you're bringin' it with this one Sis...
     
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply beautiful.

    "Trying to play a daddy’s role
    When a black woman raised me"

    Those lines said it all. Piece was very strong with emotion, which grabbed my attention from the beginning. Would love to hear this in audio.

    one luv
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaa!
    dis here is heavy and sho nuff
    deep .....step back she ready now !
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like it's you who have been set free. Freedom can be a blessing. Emotive write.
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa angel done blazes some fierce fireworks here! :flame: Loved it though! Keep it going and going!
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    7thPoet...thanks for the love.......:lol:..its called venting thanks for the love you give since you been here....nice to have you aboard

    Mind~$oul..raised by the best woman i know...a black woman with pride
    thanks for the love on dis one...come on in destee.com/chat i am sure i be reading it on the mic..i be lookin fo ya...

    $$RICH$$..at times you get fed up...lets say i am that woman fed up
    thanks for the read and your loving support

    watzinaname..freedom comes from within once you had enough you know when to let go..moreso the spirit was sent free...

    caramelpython..well it was time...i guess felt like goin off a little so now can i get the :court: back i really need it or a :bazooka: will do.....:wink:
    thanks for the love you give and all your support....

    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel....

    Vent...sweet Sista...vent. It cleanses the soul.

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
  9. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a firey piece...Raw emotion...give it to em Sis....

    Seiously tho...I feel you...and sometimes we men need to be told where to get off at.
    One Love
     
  10. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista MBA

    I am standing on a table and clapping loudly. Vent and do your thing!!! :flamet:
     
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