Black Poetry : What You Trying To Prove

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by G14:Classified, Mar 13, 2006.

  1. G14:Classified

    G14:Classified Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Check this out
    The man gone lay you down and slam you down boy you just sit right down
    snatch your faith just dont make a sound im coming with atleast 12rounds
    i got some energy here i showed love now im relenquishing it man up
    yall dudes young dudes school dudes lyrics keep you strapped too
    how long you been doing this i got vets pushing vets believe this
    its the one spectacular so incredible boy its locked and caged so dam federal
    im just so dam federal give me some dam medals so i will show who heaven sent what the hell you trying to prove im like krusty the clown boy ill smack you around give me some spinach and ill knock you down and thats straight pounds

    im trying to get better with my rhyming what yall think??

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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I don't see you missing a beat
    ya pen rockin while u movin ya feet
    words clash in a lyrical feast
    tyte drop G14:
     
  3. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You doin cool Brotha.......I'll have to hear you flow on it :)
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you got it going on flo on poet.
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This hot poet
    Your skills on par
    Much Love Brother G14
    Much Love keep foing your thang
     
  6. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow on G 14.
     
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