Quiet Poetry Lounge : What you saying?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ayaatee, Nov 13, 2003.

  1. Ayaatee

    Ayaatee Active Member MEMBER

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    I'm just saying though
    Can I
    Can you
    Can we
    Converse

    Stroll
    near the trees
    pay attention to the leaves
    Digest all the stress
    Rest
    just for a sec

    Im just saying
    You know, um
    I told you, right
    Well, just forget it a'ight
    Complications
    Verifications
    I know it can't be right

    Hold tight
    I can over come this fright
    Maybe even tonight
    I can
    We can
    Settle down
    And begin
    Over
    And envision
    Well-conditioned living

    Im just saying though
    I want you to know
    You are a treasure
    Pleasurable
    Even humble, yo
    You shine

    Glad you mine
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    can we
    will be
    i wanna be
    strollin
    watchin
    under da tree
    compassion
    set
    ya mental flow
    happy to know
    ya mine

    i like dis drop flow on
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovin the flow and lovin the sentiment, Ayaatee. Muy bueno. :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This has a nice, gentle flow.
     
  5. Ayaatee

    Ayaatee Active Member MEMBER

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    Rich: happy to know
    whoa.... so
    i guess this flow
    showed
    you know, though
    ready to blow, flow
    out - shout
    with my pen
    discipline
    a lil' bit
    imagination... yeah that's it. (thanks)

    gempis : Gracias

    watzin: glad you thought so!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed i think dat's it !!
    loved it
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh this was a good drop...i like this sorry i missed it..
    lovely drop my sister :angel1:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are saying so much :)
    truly wonderful drop
    Peace
     
  9. Ayaatee

    Ayaatee Active Member MEMBER

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    why thank you Ola, Mzb, and blue!
     
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