Quiet Poetry Lounge : What You Do to Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 4EVERLUV, Jul 15, 2006.

  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waking up to a beautiful day a gleaming smile upon face
    Its what you do to me

    Even when Im going about my day I cant help but feel so outrageous
    Its what you do to me

    Im chinin’ and grinin’ feels like Im winning the lottery
    Its what you do to me

    People wondering what is my deal they just don’t know how I feel
    Its what you do to me

    Sometimes I wonder is real or maybe Im just feeln’ ill but I know
    Its what you do to me

    Cant think of nothn’ else just wanna wrap myself up in you
    Its what you do to me

    Always makin’ sure my hair is just right and my outfit is dynamite
    Its what you do to me

    I sniff the pillow where your head lays cuz the scent of you make me so crazy
    Its what you do to me

    I wear your shirt when I go to bed and keep those flowers even though their dead
    It what you do to me

    I know I just talked to you but Im already missin’ you
    Its what you do to me

    Every time I hear a love song I sing out loud even though the words may be wrong
    Its what you do to me

    Before I go to bed at night I thank God for bringing you into my life
    Its what you do to me

    I know some of these things are so silly but I don’t care my heart feels to free
    I just luv what you do to me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I know every simle i make is

    because what u do to me

    and while at work thinks of your embrace
    is from what u do to me

    how you lay in bed and how i rub my head
    got me feeling all strongly from all
    u do to me

    the way u walk and how u talk
    soft sweet and sexy unique have me going wild
    because what u do to me

    your sweet perfume lingers
    and all the little games we play have me this way
    because what u do to me

    the way you hold me and love me have me crazy
    from what u do to me

    and that sensual kiss upon my lips i taste and taste
    see what u done to me

    inside my dreams u all i see in ya nitties woooweee
    see what u done to me

    at first light as u wake deep in your eyez i see love
    that's what u do to me
     
  3. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know how you feel gurl......deeeeeeeep Sigh...


    Heartfelt write.
    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    do u really !!
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he he he! You so funny....:juggle:
     
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    Forever 4EVERLUV

    " I know some of these things are so silly but I don’t care my heart feels to free
    I just luv what you do to me "

    The free your heart feels
    Is the wind on your mind
    Feels so fine
    don't it
     
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    How wonderful...

    It is when he does that thing he does to make you
    feel like he's doing something to you even when he isn't around..:hearts3:

    I'm diggin this flow 4everluv...very, very nice.


    epiphany:heart:
     
  8. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet ap:
    Thanks for feeln my flow.


    HODEE:
    Yes indeed....
    Thank you sweet one for
    your kind words.



    epiphany:
    Gurrrl...I see you feel me 4real.
    As always I appreciate your luv
    and visit.:)




    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What he does to you is evoke feelings of pure bliss. Such a lovely flow poetess.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It felt good reading this. Love sure is grand!


    Thanks for sharing what love feels like with us.


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart: