Black Poetry : WHAT YOU DO TO ME

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Beautiful_by_me, Jun 3, 2004.

  1. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU touched me with your words...

    Those Words danced with me and beside me,

    Always leading,

    Never following;

    Guiding those of us who dared to lift the pen from the paper,

    And speak upon all of those listening parts whom that has just began to hear the sounds of the un-said,

    Those sweet un-moans.

    And I force myself to once again to place the pen to the pad...
    For these are my thoughts...

    Only to be shared with those who can hear my thoughts as their eyes glance upon my words.

    Can you hear me? Hut, um...can ya hear me now?


    A friend indeed,

    Tia​
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Beautiful_by_me

    The beauty of the muse brings sweet inspiration.

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so warm when words touch a soul
    lovin this here wow !!!
     
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    When those words are strategically placed, you never know what effects they will have, keep these flows coming.