Black Poetry : What you do to me......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Oct 1, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok ok after yall read this...
    dont ask please...going
    though sumthin i think?????lol

    All in a read........;)

    a land of a fantasy
    I got the wooo wooo
    Tryin to go slow
    But
    Fumblin
    Rumblin
    Tumblin
    Heart let out a gleam
    Cream before the
    Scream…you feed my mind
    Guess my time is now
    Cant..
    Hold back…
    Love have came
    Tame…
    Aint no shame….
    For the game
    Just changed….
    Lifted over the clouds
    Blown to thy wind….
    From above you flew
    Into my groove…
    sparks though
    the body...
    Lost control….
    The maze
    Was no faze
    Dancing in a haze…
    Woowoo
    Wuv you
    Blast of sweet extreme
    Just hit…
    Rumble
    Tumble
    Play in a fumble
    Got me rollin as I’m
    strollin
    :confused:
    Don’t have no clue…
    But I aint blue no mo….lol
    Now that’s what you do to me…..

    please excuse me....:D
    a blkangel thang:kiss:
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You deserve to feel good. I love the way you chose to express your elation.
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was tight...
    fumblin
    rumblin
    tumblin...
    i thought i was watch'n sportcenter for a sec...lol
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poet and Khasm13...thanks for the read....

    :toast: :love: :D
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very tight...and very expressive...i love the way you switch up in all your work...it's like you right exactly how you think and i think that's off the hook...much love to you as always.
     
  6. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm vibin' in your glow.... such a sweet sweet flow!
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    certainly tumblin through the emotions wit you gurl lol :)
     
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    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...loved it Lady
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!
    with all dis seem like u caught fire
    and happiness rolling i feel ya on dis one
    sometime we all get this blissful motion
    and lay in it ........I like dis here
    express ya self !
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love.....so happy you like the way you switch up at times...
    thanks for the read ...much love

    Jazz4u and Olakuoto...thanks for the read

    triniti424...lol glad you enjoyed girl