Black Poetry : What You Deserve

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  1. D-Rock

    D-Rock Member MEMBER

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    I know your heart has been broken before..
    And you're struggling, trying to find what you've been looking for..
    You have this sweetness about you..
    This raw energy..in what you say and what you do..
    There's a passion that I sense within yourself
    You could careless about fortune or wealth
    You live your life with your heart open and your eyes closed..
    Giving merit to friends, and shutting out foes..
    You feel more than your eyes could ever see..
    I think, maybe, you see the same passion, in me..
    I know that I have only known you for awhile..
    So forgive me for saying...that I love your smile
    I love the confidence you put on display..
    I really like you, and maybe, that's wrong to say
    But, I can't help feeling what I feel..
    It's not a game, or a lie...it's real
    You've awoken something in me..
    A desire, to find what is meant to be..
    Your eyes are like diamonds in an almond colored sky..
    I know God gave you wings...you just have not yet learned to fly..
    I know I think about you more than I should..
    So I wonder, if I could...
    Talk to you for some time..
    See whether my heart, will catch up to my mind.
    No matter where this may go, or what we may do..
    I need to tell you..
    Somethings..
    You're beautiful, an angel, don't let nobody clip your wings.
    You're special.
    You need someone who is all that you deserve..all that you dream..
    All that he may seem..
    And I'm not kidding..
    And I'm not lying..
    You need someone who will give you the world, or die trying.
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And you deserve...

    two thumbs up for creating such a beautiful piece and if it was written for a specific someone, she much be pretty special. Thanks for sharing this enjoyable read!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes let her know her full worth and that she is a hidden love deep inside
    this was outstanding D-Rock
     
  4. D-Rock

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    Cocobutterskyn It was written for someone...but sadly I don't think she ever really understood how amazing she was.

    $$Rich$$ Thanks homie...I have mad respect for your work as well, thanks for reading.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    truly a love letter. Heart on "paper".

    moving personal soulpiece.
     
  6. D-Rock

    D-Rock Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah Thanks homie...that was a tight compliment...I'm glad this peice was felt
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D-Rock:
    WOW....now this joint is something
    oh... SO LOVELY in every way!!!!
    It was like a beautiful luv song singing
    in my ear.


    Much Luv,

    :heart:4EVER
     
  8. D-Rock

    D-Rock Member MEMBER

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    4EVERLUV Thank you I'm glad you felt the message and was refreshed by my words...much love
     
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