Black Poetry : What Would You Do With A Piece Of Me (PT.1)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I gave you a piece of me
    what would you do?
    would you
    hold me
    play with me
    flip me in the air
    and catch me?
    rub me on your back
    place me on your lips and kiss
    in between your thighs
    maybe masturbate with me?
    would you
    try to find out how
    many licks it would take
    to get to the center of me
    understand my emotional history
    before prejudging me
    console me or
    try to control me
    if I gave you a piece of me
    what would you do?
    stir me with your tears
    use me as your herbal tea
    to soothe you?
    inject me in your vein
    letting me flow freely
    to get to your heart
    so I can understand how
    it works why it works
    would you
    use me to play the lottery
    gamble me away or
    wipe your brow with me
    on hot daze?
    place me in a hot tub
    so I can hold every inch of you
    what would do if I gave you
    a piece of me?
    cover you with me to
    ward off the cold
    from the climate of life
    smoke me and get high off
    me if my piece was in pain
    would you weep with me
    place me under your pillow and
    sleep with me understanding
    that can't no fairy deliver
    me cherish me understand that
    there won't be any money hidden
    under your pillow but the
    piece of me will place fantasies
    in your subliminal side
    or would you hide me?

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'M SURE SO MANY THINGS SHE COULD DO WIT YA
    I WONDER MYSELF WHAT WOULD SHE DO WIT YA !?
    I'LL BE WATCHING TO SEE FROM ABOVE
    VERY WELL SCRIBE............................BV
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    RESPONDING TO YOUR PROSE Brotha....

    - I WILL -

    Are you ready to share YOU with me?
    tell me if you're afraid, hesitant,
    reserved or selfishly stingy?
    If the proposition expressed above is "to share", then I say,
    "Yes, I will"~

    I will try my best
    to do with you
    what I would want done unto me
    so meet me there-
    at the halfway mark
    ...it is up the aisle
    and down by the alter...
    where a God-like man presides
    reciting meaningful and familiar
    phrases
    this meeting place is where trueness
    resides

    "to have and to hold"-
    "for better or for worse"-
    "in sickness;in health"
    "in good times and during the bad";

    this is where I am at~
    if given the chance
    it's exactly what I would do~
    not with just a simple piece
    but instead -
    with ALL OF YOU...

    Yes, I will~ I say standing before you......
    ...standing in the presence of you and God, I'll say
    YES,************ "I DO"*************


    Blak~ I couldn't resist and had to respond!
    Lovin' the scribes you're generating and it
    got me flowin' heavily -
    You're too much to have in dissected pieces
    So I thought of you WHOLISTICALLY--real...!
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im runnin outta words...

    to tell ya *** how talented you are...lol loved this one hea from concept to creation!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** It!!!

    Blak,

    Ya see how ya inspire flowz up in here???

    Teacher, philosopher, inspirationalist...ya resume is thorough brotha!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB....

    What would i do with a piece of you?
    now... that remains to be seen...
    cause a piece of you... just wouldn't do
    when i plan to give you all of me...

    okay... okay... okay! let me go back
    cause i'm getting off track...
    What would i do with a piece of you?...

    i probably would take that piece &
    lovingly hold it close to me...
    allowing it to take control/shape & mold
    til you become a part of me...
    i'm not gonna lie & say that i
    wouldn't try to keep you just for me...
    but for now i'll take that piece of you
    & experience all that it brings...
    cause eventually i know you'll be...
    offering me the whole **** thing! :wink:


    i also could not resist!... leaving a piece of
    me for you... :) i was shynin' all ova dis one!


    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you present

    very stimulating flow at all times. And the sign of a great Poet (in my humble opinion), is the inspiration his words evoke.

    You are a Great Poet!

    Thank you for blessing us

    A
     
  8. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i don't even go

    that way and i almost wanted a piece good stuff
     
  9. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ***directing traffic holding SLOW sign***

    alright ladies...applications will be taken in order of arrival. now y'all be patient and you will each receive an interview... single women, no kids, line 1..single women with kids...line 2...married women, GO HOME

    :lol: :rolling: :lol:

    man i was gonna say this piece is gonna start something but from the looks of things i'm a little bit too late. anyway kepp the pen hot scribe cuz i'm takin notes...
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dnommo,

    blak man thanks for organizing the line :rolling:
    (pssst) tell 'em if they bring some german chocolate cake, sweet potatoe pie, or white chocolate cheesecake that you'll move 'em to the front :rolling: (cause a brother's sweet tooth is actin' up) thanks blak man.


    So'ja -

    :laugh:


    GQ -

    all those titles? If my head wasn't so vast in size I couldn't wear all tose hats :laugh:

    Cindy, N2, GA -

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww ya'll really gone make a brother cry.


    $$RICH$$ -

    As always thanks for the comps brother


    Reason -

    I try brother I try. Your comps are appreciated

    alyce -

    Great poet? thank you, your comps always leave me something to ponder.
     
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