Black Poetry : What Will You Choose?

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  1. enigma

    enigma Member MEMBER

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    Can you really die before you've learned to live?
    Can you actually take before you've learned to give?

    Is death a reality or is it just a phase?
    Is it a mystical bliss or a consequence for our deceitful ways?

    Do you know the mystery or are you oblivious to the fact that redemption is ours only if internal enslavement we don't reenact?

    Will you live a life of misery or do you even care?
    Are you dying on the inside?
    Make yourself aware.

    Is the pain so excruciating?
    Is it embedded within your soul?
    Do you need a Savior or will you be the one you console?

    Will you make your life a masterpiece?
    Or will you be an advocate of death?
    Living is truly an art.
    Make the best of it and you'll have no regrets.

    Will you dance with the darkness?
    Or will you dance with the light?
    It is your choice so you choose-
    Will death dominate your life?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this peice open eyes and make minds wonder
    very nicely done
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some choices are easier to make than others. The right choice here is clear, the ability to choose it, not always. Such food for thought...very nicely done, love the way you put this together.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a very emotional scribe much love to you..flow on
    nice drop
    Peace
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek: ...thank you for sharing these thoughts and questions...


    YOU :bazooka:


    hey and i like youre name....


    keep writting..and blessings up on ya..



    Love L
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    nice questioning scribe...
    keep it coming with da profound pieces
    one love
    khasm
     
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