Black Poetry : What use to be my future

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Apr 17, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waging war amongst myself fo mistake Ive made in the past
    Everday searching for someone to replace the perfection I once had
    Holding on to memories like climber to a cliff
    Only to reminisce and regret not hanging on to this
    Pondering thoughts that could have change this situation
    Wishing, prayin, only for no reconciliation
    No hope for me and this idle state that Im in
    Meeting women a dime a dozen, but none compare to my Perfect 10
    On a plateau by herself, the worlds highest peak
    Only for me to be at the bottom entertaining the phases of being meek
    Once uncertain of what I held, Now for sure its open arms and empty hands
    Searching for riches in all the wrong places
    When love made me naturally a wealthy man
    Robbed blind of my destiny. while stupidy was the thief
    For now all I grasp is bitter reallity
    The reallity of me reciting what could be and should be, to No avail
    Painting vivid picture with my imagination. for the reflection to gow dry and pale
    What once was a masterpiece
    Has shattered like broken glass
    What use to be my future is now only my past!


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  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    very nice,
    very nice indeed :) :wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed str8 awesome flowing
     
  4. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm liking this
    It flows with ease.
    I feel the message you're sending
    Keep flowing poet







    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes all we can do with mistakes is to learn from them. I felt heartache in this, and I can relate to this feeling.
     
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