Quiet Poetry Lounge : what u say !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    What's up, that's going down
    I heard u was back in town
    looking searching for love
    when all a long i was just above

    I felt ya heart beatin fo me
    but u can't seem to get free
    from da spell of hell u see
    but u wanna make us a we

    What's up wit this game
    that u playing and cryin shame
    feeling all da depth of sin
    after we laid bodies and mend

    I know u want us both
    but u gotta now make a choice
    what will it be my sweet lady
    or shell we continue this tri- of three
    and hearts never complete

    well let me move fast
    cause this thing will never last
    u can't have ya cake and eat it too
    i thought we was like elma glue
    so i guess this wasn't true

    where do we go from here
    no need to live in fear
    and lie about tender care
    and have others in a stare
    yo behind not being fare

    I can't wait all day
    in this child play
    but u can have it yo way
    just not with me i can't stay

    I'm outta here !

    :SuN045:
     
  2. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang Rich! That's crazy! Sometimes, unfortunately, its like that but at least you see the situation for what it is! Great write!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not a situation I'd like to be in. Written on point Rich, here's my take on it...

    Looking for love
    in every wrong place
    You say you couldn't find me
    but we know that's not the case

    It could have been heaven
    but you made it hell on earth instead
    Acting like Mr. World Traveled Lover
    taking yet another to your bed

    And each time you're done
    you expect me to always be there
    Pretending like I don't have feelings
    and acting like I don't care

    It appears you've caught feelings for another
    this time, and now you have to choose
    I'll tell you what, I'm tired of sitting out on a limb
    waiting, hoping, and singing the blues

    But tell me this,
    How can you be in love with 2 women at the same time?
    Wanting to give the world to both, inviting both into
    your heart of hearts for a love sublime?

    Oh yeah, you did say you could have
    your cake and eat it too
    You're such a catch, Mr. Bigshot
    the rules of common decency do not apply to you

    Well this ain't Burger King
    You can't just have it your way
    I'll just step aside, make your threesome one less
    And you two can continue to frolic and play
    You're not playing for keeps, and she'll come to
    that painful realization...someday
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    can't lay and play then stay when it 's not yo take ...betta push on ....i'm movin !

    yes watz that time is now as i mound and ride out into the sunset in search of !

    Thankz a million ladies
     
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    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What you say?
    I can’t have it my way
    When you know darn well
    My love is here to stay

    Awww baby why you wanna play
    Don’t’ you know this is a new day
    I never did like rolling in the hay
    Time to end this foray

    Don’t’ you know I did what I did for Us
    I got up on it and rode dat bus
    I did it without shame, just wanted an end
    to all the fuss, to all the fight

    He is not who or what I want
    Never had anything that could match your touch
    Could never satisfy this raging fiyah
    It is YOU who’s always been my desire

    So I did what I did
    Giving you time to see
    The beauty, the boldness
    Inside of me

    Come let us go
    Now we can grow
    Cause I never stopped loving you
    And my love now and will always remain
    TRUE….to you and only you

    See I went out to learn his game
    So you and I could end this shame~ful state
    We’ve fallen in, yep, I got the goods
    So we can Win

    Be free from da sin
    Free from the pain
    Remove these shackles from off our brainz
    Free for us to live again

    That’s all I have to say
    So please don’t delay
    For it’s with you my King
    That my heart beats for…

    Today!


    That’s what came up for

    M.E.
    :hearts2:


    now back to my corner
    complete my self-imposed time-out
    still trying figure out
    what my life's purpose here
    is all about

    must read your words from afar
    cause they stir up in me memories, passions
    and desires to go futher
    and I'm not ready
    my feeling state a bit unsteady

    and gets me in trouble
    have ere'body thinking
    i'm in a body double...or something
    just wanted to drop this and let you all know
    my love remains true and will forever grow
    and it's for this reason...i gotta go!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Forth what u say is heartly true
    then my dear i come back fo u
    so we can move on higher
    share moments and deep desires
    be the flame to each other fire

    I see u been rollin bold
    that had me about to stroll
    but u answered warm not cold
    so i'm back into ya mold
    let's start ova again
    with the love that we are friends
    then we can mend

    see i had it up to here
    with the three and this fear
    when my soul & heart care
    i couldn't go on nor could i bare
    the mixture of this game untame
    i rise , i rise in search of thee

    I guess we both have a touch
    one that clutch
    and yes let's make it a us
    ring me up one mo time
    so my face can ware a shine
    and we fix this twist in time
    and say u will always be mines
    in true to the cause .