Black Poetry : What U R 2 "Me"!!

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  1. Sunshyne

    Sunshyne Active Member MEMBER

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    "This is Inspired by & Dedicated to my Very Special Someone"

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    U R my reason to “Smile”
    4 I haven’t done that in a While

    U R my bright & shining “Star”
    Even though I am here & U R Far

    U R my saving “Grace”
    ‘Cause B4 U I was in a God awful Place

    U R my reason to “Wake”
    4 granted – U – I would never Take

    U R the spring in my “Step”
    4 knowing U R in my life gives me that extra Pep

    U R the answer 2 this question on a “Quiz”
    “Who’s the man?” U know U Is

    U R my breath of fresh “Air”
    I feel U all around me – Everywhere

    U R my new meaning of “Life”
    4 in your world I feel no Strife

    U R my peace & new frame of “Mind”
    4 in you I’ve found a man who is honest, loyal and Kind

    U R my morning cup of chocolate “Latte”
    One sip of you is what starts my Day

    U R like my afternoon “Snack”
    I nibble on you and I’m back on Track

    U R my reason to “Think”
    U keep my mind on edge all the way to the Brink

    U R bring me hope and “Rationale”
    By telling me I’m worth loving & making me you Gal

    U R my reason to “Change”
    To be with you - my life I’m willing to Re-arrange


    U R my chance to “Realize”
    When U want something really bad….just Visualize

    U R my anytime Christmas “Gift”
    Just being in your arms give my spirit a Lift

    U R my New Year’s “Resolution”
    Keeping U in my life is my problem’s Solutions

    U R my math “Equation”
    U + me = quite a Sensation

    U R my completeness, my all & “All”
    Even as a young girl 4 U I did Fall

    U R my reason to “Dress”
    To others - when I’m on your arm I want to Impress

    U R my food for “Thought”
    The nutrition U give my brain others still seek or have Sought

    U R like my evening “Meal”
    I fill up on U & oh how good I “feel”

    U R like a job with high & Steady “Pay”
    I’ll keep on working 4 U & never “Stray”

    U R like hot chocolate with marshmallows & “Steam”
    Your warm & comforting – a cold girl’s Dream

    U R like Coke-a-Cola in a cold frosty “Glass”
    The “Real Thing” baby, 4 what more could I Ask

    U R the answer to every father’s “Plight”
    “Treat my daughter well & always do what you know is Right

    U R everything I could ask for, want or need in a “Man”
    4 you give me the strength to turn every “I can’t” into “yes I CAN”

    What I ever did before you…I swear to you I don’t “Know”
    I guess I settled not knowing any better…for the status Quoi

    Now that I have you…I’m not going to let you “Go”
    This I had to tell you…you’re my everything…U R you “Know”

    I Love You Baby!!!!
    :love: :kiss:
     
  2. Sunshyne

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    I'm Back

    Hello everyone,

    I'm back...I hope everyone had & is having a great holiday season. I was quite busy and had numerous family things going on, but now I am back and will be submitting new verses from time to time to try and inspire and express myself and what is going on with me. I am also going to get back to the business of reading your works and commenting on them too. I hope I am welcomed back into the family fold so to speak and look forward to continued correspondence between all of us.

    I'm glad to be back. Remember keep on putting out words of inspiration and encouraging others to do the same.

    "Sunshyne"
     
  3. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write and glad your back
     
  4. Sunshyne

    Sunshyne Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the comment and the well wish to my coming back. Take care,
    "Sunshyne"
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne

    It's about time Lady!!!!

    Welcome back!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  6. Sunshyne

    Sunshyne Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks GQ,

    Have you talked to Chris lately? Tell him to email me or something so I know he is alive. His birthday is this month around Christmas I believe it is the 24th but not sure. Thanks for the warm welcome. But as you should know the end of the year is ruff on us GI's trying to get the office in order for 2003...cut me some slack please.

    Take care,
    Sunshyne
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RU in Love?
    lovely piece
     
  8. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great way to come back home...

    Baby girl welcome back home...never more to roam...when you are busy we truly understand...love the way you showed props to yo man...any sista who can put it down like that is worthy of two finger snaps and a booty slap! Wow...FABULOSITY has been achieved!

    Blessings on Ya House!:toast:
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a wonderful peace - and if you need a reason to LOVE you will find it here! Welcome Home!

    2fish
     
  10. Sunshyne

    Sunshyne Active Member MEMBER

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    I want to take this opportunity to thank Shaz {if it were not for you I would never have known about this site that brings so much love to an up and coming wanna be poet like myself) and msluciousb {your words wonderful to someone who is still a little unsure of the stuff she writes} & Twofish {I know here (this site) is a great place to find love as well as give it to others}. The welcome home was heartfelt from all of you. I appreciate the love and support everyone here at Destee.com has shown me right from the begining. Everyone please keep on doing what you are doing by continuing to write what is in your hearts and inspiring others to do the same...we all have things to say and can learn oh so much from just listening to what we each have to say and trying to pass on the message it conveys.

    Love to all of you...you'll be hearing more verses from me soon!!!