Quiet Poetry Lounge : WHAT U GONE DO??DEEP ****

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sheikdadon, Aug 11, 2006.

  1. sheikdadon

    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 7, 2006
    Messages:
    64
    Likes Received:
    9
    Occupation:
    MILITARY (ARMY)
    Location:
    ATLANTA GA
    Ratings:
    +9
    DARK ALLEYS CORRUPTED WITH FOUL BLOCKAGE
    MURDERS IN DA PARK WHILE EVERY CHILD WATCHES
    HUSTLAS HIT DA STRIP TO KNOCK OFF THEIR WORK
    EYE'N YA DAUGHTER CUZ SHE CUTE IN A SKIRT
    SINGLE PARENT PRAYIN BUT U CANT STOP IT
    CUZ IF U DONT WORK WHO GONE PROVIDE FOR THE KIDS
    DADDY UP NORTH LONG TERM HE DOIN A BID
    A 3-5 TURNED TO MORE FOR JOOKIN SOME RIBS
    IN DA HOOD EVERY OTHA HOUSE IS ABANDONED
    CRCKHEADS SKINNIER THAN SUSAN SARANDON
    MOTHERS GOT DAUGHTERS OUT TURNING TRICKS
    YOUNG MEN CATCH HERPES FROM FEINS SUCKIN THEY *****
    AS A SOCIETY WE SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF OURSELF
    BUT AS ALWAYS HISTORY DOES REPEAT ITSELF
    SKIN DEEP IS SUPERFICIAL
    U GOTTA GET TO DA NERVE TISSUE
    HITTIN DA CRITICAL ISSUE
    HITTIN HARD LIKE HOT SLUGS OR EVEN A MISSLE
    AS U CAN READ N AVIDLY SEE
    MAN ITS COLD OFF IN DESE STREETS
    LIL ****** TALKIN BOUT THEY GOTTA TOTE A PEICE
    ALL BLACKS WANNA BLAME IT ON DA MAN
    THE LAST TIME I CHECKED DOG DA DOPE WAS IN YA HAND
    DA CHOICE IS YOURS HOMEY SO COME UP WITH A PLAN
    WHAT U GONE DO THIS IS DEEP ****
    NOT AN ISSUE IN POLITICS BUT WE EAT N SLEEP THIS
    WE AS A PEOPL ARE RESILIENT
    ON TOP OF THAT WE GOT POTENTIAL TO CONVEY BRILIANCE
    DA BALLS N YA COURT WHAT U GONE DO WIT IT
    DONT CROSS OVER N PUT UP A BRICK
    **** DADDY TELL ME WHAT U GONE DO
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    whoaaaaaaaaa! u blaze this piece......
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 19, 2005
    Messages:
    3,872
    Likes Received:
    134
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    working to own my plus size empire.....
    Location:
    I'm a Georgia Peach!!!!
    Ratings:
    +135
    wow such fire in ya writes. i like i like. if you want come check me out at http://myspace.com//nevar112. hope to hear from ya. and oh i will be flowing back with your flo ba. believe that!!!!!!1
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    upping this joint here with such power
     
Loading...