Black Poetry : What u do

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jan 7, 2009.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Today as I was walking

    I had this over whelming
    Feeling of emptiness
    I knew it was :spinstar:you :spinstar:on my mind

    I came so close to seeing your smile today
    I think in a way you avoided me

    I asked some friends
    Did you see her?

    They know I am crazy in love with you

    Then one told me he saw you and spoke to you

    I wanted him to tell me details
    I pictured you smiling and commanding the room and you radiating:angel1:

    I couldn’t ask him
    He would laugh at me

    He did tell me you went to lunch with a friend of ours
    You came back spoke to him and said
    Tell Him I will email him and see him later

    So as I started my commute home from work
    I felt empty
    I knew it was you

    Then I recalled
    I hadn’t eaten lunch

    I was empty all over again
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    lol

    your ending made me laugh

    i was reading a sad love story and then bang

    NO LUNCH

    thanks for the ride brethren
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm with so'ja on that ending.:)

    ...good drop, though. loving from afar will send us through so many changes...as we wish upon that unseen star we believed in as a child...hoping for a chance meeting...a brief conversation...that a moment of togetherness will lead to lasting happiness...where we become ONE.

    NICE.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An empty feeling could be that love we just haven't put our official moves on yet....or...geez I forgot to eat! :) I enjoyed this Hodee.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    like nothing to munch on !! yet a love meal will be served hold on !
     
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    free2b_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :time:
    THE TIME IS NEAR
    SO LET ME MAKE MYSELF CLEAR
    IF YOU WANTED TO SEE ME
    EMAIL ME
    YOU DID NOT RESPOND
    TO MY GESTURES
    FOR US TO GET IT ON
    YOU KNOW WHERE I LIVE
    YOU KNOW WHAT TO GIVE
    A LIL BIT OF YOUR TIME
    TO MAKE AN EFFORT
    ON YOUR PART
    LET'S NOT MAKE THIS A ONE TIME
    SPARK
    OF CURIOUSITY
    YOU MUST MAKE YOUR MARK
    WITH ME
    IF YOU WANT ME TO KNOW
    HODEE
    IT'S ALWAYS BEEN US
    FROM THE START
     
  7. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Sexsomnia" ... there will be no sleep!

    :hearts2:

    You say
    You want Yourself
    A piece of Me

    So I’ll Fill You Up
    My Sweet
    I’m your HODEE

    The kind of love
    Like you never knew

    Satisfy till you’re
    All Aglow.

    Over and over
    Oh Yes Darling Satisfy

    Fulfilling every wish
    You’re every dream on high

    I won’t rush
    Nor leave you unfinished with desires

    If I built it up
    I can put out that fire

    Take my hand
    Cause I am your Man

    Make You Mine
    No one else for this Man

    My number is 555
    Four more digits Come Get Satisfied

    Hit my numbers
    I’ll be by your side

    Your friends ask Girl
    What you do?

    Tell em Baby
    I did the Freak with You

    Think I’m joking
    Dial the last four numbers

    Growing love thing
    The next world wonder

    555- U I Adore