Black Poetry : What U Do 2 Me...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Skybeauty, Oct 31, 2007.

  1. Skybeauty

    Skybeauty Member MEMBER

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    Yesterday I saw your beauty....
    Was it in my reflection?
    It called to me....
    Was it in my mind?
    Thoughts of you not here
    Thoughts of you gone forever
    Linger all around me
    Yet I see you....
    I feel your touch
    I hear your voice
    I smell your sweet scent
    Yet when I look for you your not there
    I can feel you behind me
    breathing softly on my neck
    I lean my head off to the side
    U know how I do
    I turn around in an instant and your gone
    WHOOO!!!!
    There is truely power in the mind
    I feel myself going crazy
    Alone in this house being and feeling lazy
    Trying to occupy my mind and time
    all I can think about is....
    when will this end
    (the feeling of wanting you so much)
    when will you come back to me
    are you gone forever :qqb018:
    I miss you!!!!! ​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely one not gone forever but just on an journey
    soon one will return to da awaiting heart .......feelings can carry you into places
    you never could of known ........
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really some lonely stuff right here man to have a girl want me that bad i'll have to be there if nothing else at least for the sweet kisses girl
     
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    i could ffel the depth of the emotion in this tight drop poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, just the way someone can just linger inside your heart and mind, this was quite endearing.
     
  6. Skybeauty

    Skybeauty Member MEMBER

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    Some may not understand....and think that I'm just a sad women in this world caught up in somekinda loneliness...but some of my thoughts are just that "my thought" and my emotions are "my emotions"...yeah I do get through troubled times like anyone else...however while on my way to the other side, I pick up my pen and I began to log my thoughts at that moment...some are dreams and others reality.....however its just me...peace and love always and I thank you all especailly Watzinaname and Asimplepoet for seeing the quality of my emotions & thoughts....cuz to me thats just what poetry is...