Quiet Poetry Lounge : What u deserve

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    :hearts2: What u deserve :hearts2:
    I wanna make love to u the way that u know that u deserve to be made love too
    And u can judge by the way that I hug you
    So firmly that all your inner muscles work to push warm wet troubles down your thighs
    And I
    Message your neck, in till your entire body gets so wet ,that u begin to feel sweat
    Build up along your back
    And
    Water in your eyes
    And the way that u will know that its right is
    When your nipples become harder then your life is
    And your
    Blouse becomes undone and we begin to transfer energy slowly back and forth
    Between your breast and my tongue and your knees git numb and stomach muscles succumb
    And you
    Close your eyes like u aint never closed them for no one
    And aint noting wrong if u feel the urge to cum while your pants are still on
    I mean you aint got to impress me just be yourself
    And
    Loosen your belt and slide out of those wet pants
    Have another slip of rum and Koo Koo
    Its like were in the Bahamas
    But the truth is
    This is the best place to be on earth right now
    And after I undress and lay down
    I’m gonna whisper poems in your ear
    At frequencies so beautiful that only your clitoris can hear
    And I want u to climb on top of me so that u can
    Stare at me like I couldn’t possibly be human
    Like the incense and the candles must have channel some enchant sprit that just
    Came up inside of u and spread out putting firm pressure against all your muscles like there aint no way that it could possibly be me ticking the insides of your rib cage
    Like it’s not possible that a man could make u so hot that all your body’s natural oils and juices
    Just turn into heat waves
    And
    You aint never opened your self up to nobody before so how could the sound track of your life be played? And Who gave me permission to take u to that unique stage that few women ever git too where the orgasms building up inside of u are so powerful that the pressure feels like it could split u
    And when it comes u grasp my head like u could push it thru the bed
    Like u think u could come thru the bed like the orgasms warming up your insides like flares
    Like it could possibly soak thru the mattress and the box spring and spread across the floor and down the stairs where there’s 100 one 100 year old black women dressed in white circling your house chanting in tongues and screaming their prayers
    See this is what u deserve and
    I
    Came
    Here
    To
    Take
    U
    There
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was ummm hot and a passion of a desire released
    take her there...this was str8 enjoyed the read...Angel
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HookUp you hooked her up and gave her what she deserved. :driveby: Got folks outside speaking in tongues. :jump:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome spicy hot treat flow here
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To be deserving of something like that...wow...words escape me. Sure was a toasty vibe brotha.
     
  6. angelicsage

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    Thank you...

    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:

    ...then take me baby...*whew*...lawd have mercy
    "Frequencies only my :uhh: can hear..."....Whoa :weird:
    My dearest poet...u are infinite beyond vocabular!
    How do you do....this thing that you do...
    that leaves me reeling after reading your words...
    but hey..this was much to hot to not respond...
    so check this out....-------------> :wink:
    hope u like...

    http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?p=292647#post292647

    Sage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    backing this awesome flow up to da top
     
  8. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See...dat's what um talkin' bout !!!

    Ummm...okay... daaaamn... :callme: ??? *LOL* nah but for real... please keep taking us there Brutha Poet...

    Much amazement,
    Akilah :bowdown:
     
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