Black Poetry : What touch me touches you

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See ….
    What touch me touches you
    But you fail to see….
    It’s the blind leading the blind….

    In the corner you sit
    In a hush of a whisper
    Covered filled fantasies…
    Black sands of love
    Deeply sink inside
    Strong and proud
    Trying to look the part
    But cant play it for …..
    Why do you do the things you?

    Whispers of poetry
    A lasting lullaby
    Of …….. bull……
    Hail and snow falls

    The earth opens up…
    Twisted mix of a mystical set
    Playing a game aint even tame
    Then you try to blame
    As ice fires flame
    When you all up in the middle
    I can’t fix your past
    Or make the past fade
    With all the...
    Lies and betrayal
    Secrets of hidden truth…
    Do catches up with you
    and begins to haunt you
    No matter how you hide

    See ….
    What touch me touches you

    The summer demons
    fall from the sky…
    Over the horizon
    The moon sits half tilt
    And the black rain runs…
    Pours like a waterfall of fire
    Killing the dream and hiding the sun..

    See ….
    What touch me touches you


    The sad part is you have no clue


    A BlkAngel Thang.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice well felt scribe here flow head on express
     
  3. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    That's beautiful and heartfelt...very emotive.

    :thanks: for sharing an intimate point in your life with us.

    :toast:
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emotively expressed and felt. Flow on.
     
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