Black Poetry : What The World Will Recieve

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you mind if I let you sit between my thighs and unwind?
    As I massage nurturing oils through your long coils
    Starting at the root and ending at the tips
    While we share fantasies of dreamed of trips
    A bond so natural and fulfilling
    "Can you braid my hair?"
    I answer yes,ready and willing
    It didn't feel so right having you near my nest
    Sent chills up my spine and burns in my chest
    We sat and reminisced on our relationships how i was never ready for love
    And your's always flew away like a dove.
    On our styles how you always seemed to know what you want
    And kept it simple with a head full of locks and your ear
    Accompanied by a blunt
    While I stayed me,or who I thought the world would recieve.
    You asked me over and over what do you want
    My answer was always to live happy
    To smile gladly
    You asked mewhy aren't you that way
    My response was long and I had no clue as what to say
    I never thought a guy like you would appeal to me
    Seems like right now you're the only thing real to me
    We share a bond a sacred unity
    On my level sharing sweet conversation
    Friendship no sexual relation
    I'm afraid of what you can discover
    Afraid to become your lover
    So I hide my feelings
    Giving you cheap dealings
    Your hands I recall I don't no why make me pause
    I wish they were the hands that replace mine and make me smile at night
    Remember when i asked you what was best as i lay on your chest
    You answered,"all of you from your brown eyes to your big toe too."
    If only I could see that in me
    Still I'm what the world will recieve........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwwwww!
    u are whom u are and what u are to be
    a warm love place'd for da world to see
    and the floating motion of compassion
    a heated desire to see u through dis
    was off da hook i'm feeling u whewww!
    flow head on now !
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love Rich:wink:
     
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    this was a tight drop:):) I felt like I was ther in that conversation.


    ......The world ain't ready honey.....
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luvv: thanx for the love SwtT
     
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    Sometimes we don't see all the special things that others see in us. Time that you do, SensualReality, for there is so much talent in you. Keep the flows coming.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Watz for seeing it in me:wink:
     
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    Wonderful, wonderful piece, I loved the way you laid this out.. thanks for sharing this.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got nothing but love thank you :thanks:
     
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    love this piece sister...
    I too love to play in a
    man's hair.../ love the
    portrait of intimacy
    and endearment
    you captured in this
    peace...

    Wonderful :spinstar:
     
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