Black Poetry : What the World Needs

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What the world needs
    Is to do away with greed
    With so many mouths to feed

    AND FEWER ENEMIES

    What a child needs
    Is love and support
    More from her source

    LESS FROM THE COURTS

    What a girl needs
    Is a man's remedy
    Complete with family tree

    NOT HIM OVERSEAS

    What a man needs
    Is opportunity
    To build communities

    FREE OF BIGOTRY

    All the world needs
    Are people in love
    Worshiping God

    NOT BREAKING ~
    HIS HEART :em4600:


    Darryl Abdu Omari :nono:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2008
     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    love sweet love..

    I can dig it mayne!

    nice flow 1poet as usual!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes indeed, what the world needs. This was touching 1poet.
     
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    I'm really feel this poem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The world need healing
    caressed wit deeper feelin
    u so on point .
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i luv it
    that is so true
    that is exactly what the world needs..keep preachin brotha!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes the world needs what you say poet

    i'm just wondering were you referring to earth?

    because i don't see this happening here

    but i do agree with you 100,000%

    that we'd need to fix this pain out here man and heartache

    nice read poet1
     
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