Black Poetry : What the HELL Do I Tell My Man??!!

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its you and me
    Alone
    In this room
    Alone
    We used to be
    Alone
    But now I’m with
    Someone
    But your still
    Alone
    And you still want…

    Me

    But boy I’m engaged
    My man can’t be betrayed
    Although I once loved you
    The love we had is untrue
    So tell me why your steppin’ closer
    Baby I just said I can’t be an adulterer
    Because I love my man more than anything
    That being the reason I wear this ring
    See?
    The ring on my left hand
    The one with the diamonds and 14 karat band
    So tell me why your steppin’ even closer
    Are you even listenin’ to the words in my emotions?

    No please…

    Don’t whisper my name softly
    You know that can change my emotions easily
    As my hands
    Slowly…
    Slip…
    Into yours…
    NO!
    I can’t do this, I have a man that I adore
    So I’ll just move my body back a little
    So that your closeness won’t be so brittle
    **** baby!
    Please tell why you do this?!
    You know that I can’t go through with it!

    Wha….?

    Ummmmmmmmmm……

    PLEASE tell me why you got even closer?
    So that now I can feel the amounting pressure
    The touch…
    The lips…
    The hands…
    The hips…
    The sway we make as we embrace in a kiss…
    And the tongues set on fire the embracement of our heat
    As my mind screams…
    STOP IT!
    But my body wins in defeat…
    Its done
    Its over
    What the hell do I do now?

    ****!….

    Through all my defiances, you got me anyhow…


    Uh-oh…
    Oh my god!…
    ****!…

    What the hell do I tell my man????!!!!
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl....
    honesty is always the best policy....
    just as long as you don't take it to jerry...:lol:
    I'm just playin.
    But girl I was feelin ya flow.
    Keep keepin on!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah thats true...:) lol, thanks girl!
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Temptation comes in many forms but I have to agree with Swt-t.
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep it comes in many forms, thats tru....but this happened a while ago and i told him about it....he was mad...but we got through it...:)
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****... temptation can be sumthing strong, but LOVE is even stronger. thatsright tell that man no lol. tyte poem...
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Boy o boy....Lovely let it be me and I'd falll..;) Tyte poem!!!!
     
  8. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wait..angelic....what did i say that you agree with??? :confused:
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep it is strong...lol girl u r so crazy:)....thanks
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    <------- that was to poetically



    lol, SwTT thanks girl!:):)

    i was kinda confused about that myself....
     
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