Black Poetry : what si going on????

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    losing my mind sort of wondering
    and wandering
    like a fool struggling with this thought
    on my head....
    things happen and faces changin
    the soul have caved in no peace i find
    for the bright light is dim
    darkness have came over my heart
    the mind is gone havin no clue
    of what yesterday brought and what to day bring
    suffering and cryin what have this world came to
    a place of peace destoryed by the blink of an eye
    childern ruin by another half raised tryin to be grown
    somewhere the growth was stop only to run wild
    back lashed and terminal not the fault of the child
    but whats to blame
    the world for it forgot to stay a family pulled apart and
    stab in the back prayers go out but not for this land
    when we hurt right here it became politics for the money
    losing goals land of the free yea right land of the half doers...
    broken chains refixed and lock how do we get out......
    half help most of insalts thinking your dumb for the skin color you carry
    brother fighting brother sister hurting sister fathers disrespect mothers
    while mothers sleepin with son in laws and fathers preyin on the young
    sons sling on the corner family ripen what they sow...
    not of this world i tell you....not of this world...
    beat down and forgotten
     
  2. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Very insightful....nice touch.

    Very nice.


    :toast: :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well well !!!!
    u said so much in this peice dat's felt and very insightful
     
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    Yes, striking piece, keep it comin!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Monetary,suddenpassion
    thank you for taken time out and reading and replin
    and much love Mr Rich
     
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