Black Poetry : What Really Is Left To Say

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  1. Soullyricist

    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So after a year of loving a man who defines me as his queen…something you forbid yourself from doing
    You want to clear the air about a few things
    And so I’m thinking to my self
    What really is left to say
    You said it all with
    “I don’t want to be with you”
    I have long since cried my tears over you
    Personally whatever it is you have to say won’t mean much at all
    But my curiosity is wanting to know what words you will dare to try to speak in the presence of me
    The woman you left because you simply weren’t ready
    I think I understand
    You’re having sleepless nights
    Thoughts of me being happy are raping your dreams and now you’re feeling just a little guilty
    Your current lady doesn’t do half of what I did and now you want me to know that you really did appreciate it when it was yours
    But really
    You closed both doors in my face so
    What really is left to say
    I’m happy in my life
    My man has taken your place as my King
    And he acts the part
    So what ever it is you have to say
    I will sit and look concerned or like a really give a **** because when you leave
    I will laugh uncontrollably because
    The thought of you having absolutely anything to say
    Is down right funny


    © Tawanda Roberson
     
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    Thoughts of me being happy are raping your dreams and now you’re feeling just a little guilty

    WOW THAT WAS A REALLY DEEP LINE, COOL I DIG IT.
    :toast: :toast: :toast:
     
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    This is a very inspirational piece for me! It shows growth and strength to move forward when the heart has been hurt! Nicely put!
     
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    so much strength
    you have in this piece
    you know your worth
    much love
    Peace
     
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    da depth of it makes me smile coz u have the touch
    the will power and grace .....flow on !
     
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    I got chills reading this one... i really felt it...more than u know. :)
     
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