Quiet Poetry Lounge : What more can I do?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Anwar Aswad Ami, Sep 15, 2003.

  1. Anwar Aswad Ami

    Anwar Aswad Ami Active Member MEMBER

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    What more can I do?

    I’ve tried everything.
    I keep tryin’ to show my love to u.
    I give u my everything.
    What more can I do?

    I’ve given you a beautiful home.
    I’ve tried to make all your dreams come true.
    I baby sit the children while u roam.
    What more can I do?


    U know I will try anything.
    I give u all the things, that money brings.
    I work three jobs and it’s kinda hard.
    But all these things u disregard.
    I keep trying to show my love for u.
    What more can I do?

    I’m always trying to prove my love.
    I try and reason with u each and every day.
    But the way u act is unheard of.
    But everything must come to an end.
    I’ve tried everything to show my love for u.
    We’ve had another talk.
    We’ve even had lunch in New York.
    Lord! Please tell me what more can I do?


    © copyright empty pockets Anwar Aswad Amir
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!
    sometime we do all we can
    and yet they don't understand
    sometime we have to let go
    make a change of heart
    so they know
    sometime we have to end da war
    and take the battle to a new ground
    so then they hear the sonic soundz
    of voice but then sometime we've made
    our choice
    sometime the dreams are faded

    U did all u can do theirs nothing else for u to do
    but make a move or choose ....
    the MIND must work overtime
    the answer is within look in the mirror to seek it.
    well felt
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes
    feeling you on this
    the question
    well felted
    much love and many blessing
    Peace
     
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