Black Poetry : What makes it?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Feb 17, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Answer me this.
    I was just sitting,
    In the front of the screen,
    Doing some site seeing,
    Taking in scribes and believing,
    That each word came from the heart,
    And a thought came to me.
    What makes it?
    What makes the lines flow,
    So easily, effortlessly?
    Do each scribe represent,
    Times that are present,
    Times that are absent from fantasy,
    And here with reality?
    Is that what makes the voice speak so loud,
    And is that why certain things we can allow?
    Is there any other way to have it?
    Or do we just sit and let our minds drift,
    Our minds lift from the face of the earth,
    To a place that has not yet been birthed.
    Where we have the power and authority,
    To make it how we want it to be.
    Where anything goes,
    And creativity shows,
    As we paint our own mental masterpiece.
    Can that make it better?
    Because we form our own world,
    Full of joy, passion, peace…
    Never ending.
    So what makes it?
    Fantasy? Reality?
    I guess it’s both…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow ......good question that is filled with both
    that makes it so unique .....tyte mental thoughts
    rumbling
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice scribe.....
    flow on.... :angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes fantasy and reality, sometimes one or the other. I liked the way you put this together, something to ponder.
     
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    da flow is straight internal....
    the beauty from within....
    lovely write gurl....
    one love
    khasm
     
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