Black Poetry : What looks good to you just may kill you!

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  1. sxe_poetress

    sxe_poetress New Member MEMBER

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    She looks so sexy, pretty and sweet

    Swaying her hips as she walks the beat

    Her admirer peeps her from across the way

    Screams out "hey" "hey" you look'n fine today

    She turns and puts her hands on her hips

    And asks him if he wants to take a sip

    A sip of her love, so wild and free

    He accepts her offer and they turn n leave

    Back at her place he puts his hands on her *ss

    They shared grinds and kisses, kisses in the mass

    Not speaking a word, not knowing her name

    Only caring about the lust he was so eagar to gain

    They got so freaky you wouldn't believe your eyes

    Humping and pumping not being wise

    No comdom for the act, the act of sex

    Wild positions and toys with special effects

    A one night stand because she looked so good

    Playin Russian Roulette like no one should

    After day break came they parted ways

    Remembering the hours that they had laid

    He runs into her again still not knowing her name

    But this time she didn't look the same

    Her eyes said death, her weight had dropped

    He contemplated on whether to speak or not

    Before he could turn n leave thier eyes had met

    She wondered if she could tell him yet

    Reveal to him, something that would rob him of living

    This dreadful disease that she had give'n

    As he approached her the tears began to flow

    She said "there is something I want you to know"

    She revealed to him that she had aids

    He had flash backs and images of the night they had laid

    He dropped to his knees and began to cry

    Begg'n and plead'n with god ask'n him why

    He got tested and confirmed his nightmare was true

    He was gonna die and there was noth'n he could do

    The rest of his life he would ponder the thought

    If he had used a condom, Aids he wouldn't have caught

    One year later he was laid to rest

    Who knows, who has what; are you gonna guess?


    One Love, One Aim, One Destiny
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sho ya right!

    So sad but so true...we need to get the word out...and that is for real...cause this is the plague, that is on the rage...killing our young people under age 18-25 won't live to see old age! Going to an early grave....Yo subject matter is off the deep end very serious stuff....scribe that truth...it's polite to spit truth!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  3. renae

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    gurl u know u right.. b4 layin down 2 bed one should use a condom and ask'em if he's eva been tested. cuz sometymes condoms aren't enuff either.
     
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    Anonimus??Inc®© Member MEMBER

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    A Good but sad poem Keep Writing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sadly sad yet true u did it here nicely flow on poet !
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    great piece. It flows well.

    In this day and age it's due to ignorance that ppl still don't use condoms when they're not in monogamous relationships. Responsible sex or no sex!

    *Emma*
     
  7. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt this to the tips of my toes. All it takes is a minute to save a life ....Your life.....

    Nice
    Tasha
     
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    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****, this is thought provoking. Many times when you get caught up in the intensity of lust & sex, your mind is not clear, and contracting an STD or worse is the last thing on your mind. This is a vivid reminder of an all to often common scenario--- we need to take casual sex without condoms seriously. Me & everyone. Thank you for giving us all another much needed wake up call. Peace.
     
  9. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was way to tyte! Welcome to the boards.
     
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