Quiet Poetry Lounge : What kind of man are you?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Jun 24, 2006.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What kind of man would treat his woman like she dont exist
    Anotha black angry woman hell yeah im pissed

    Because you sit back with the smirk
    Keep smirking chump and Im about to tear off that shirt

    Keep on pushing me playboy and you wont have that sneaky smile
    Dont think I dont know about Ms.Thing being wild

    With you
    Its fine boo-boo

    Cause by the time you get this your things will be sold on Ebay
    And quite frankly there's nothing you can say

    But please Mr. Ebay can I have my life back
    My baby left me naked could ya once cut me some slack

    Ahh man she sold my rings
    And all my personal things

    [email protected] guess you messed up
    Now your stuck

    Trying to buy back all the things I bought anyway
    Oh yeah dont worry the rest of your things have been sprayed(with bleached)
    Dont play

    With me
    You want to be free
    Couldnt let it be

    Had to go and mess up our beginning with your doggish way
    That's why I say

    Your tail has to go
    No need for you to show

    Me you care
    Got my hair

    Done off your maxed off card
    Dont worry ba the loan shark

    Was looking for his cheese
    Oh man get off your knees

    Look at you
    Looking like a pile of do-do

    Its sad
    You drove me mad

    Huh whats that you say Where's your Car
    Well lets just say you wont be able to get far

    Because the dealership said you was 3 months behind
    OOOps look at the time

    There's the door
    Dont want you no more
    Go be with cha little ***

    But what I really wanted to know

    What kind of a man were you?

    I guess now you know not to mess with this Chica!!!
    Adios Muchacho!!!!!!!!!
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bball: SLAM [email protected] DUNK GIRL GAAAAAAAAAAALEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THAT WAS COLD I LOVE THAT SISTA FOR REAL YOU GOT IT GIRL MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa / happy i'm not in those shoes he have to ware
    str8 up in his grill fo real .....done / out / bye / busted !!!
     
  4. nevar

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    thanks rich when im thinking evil things i just vent. and this is something i would never do but it sho felt good on paper. what a relief.

    sweetee29 thanks for the love shown babygurl.
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    oooohhh....im mad I missed this one....this is funnay as hell....****, Nevar...it's like that? done maxed out dude, bleached his gear...

    man, I couldnt stop laughing at this one.....real tight flow...would like to see this one live...gurl
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey you know what ab if i make it tyler wont have nothing on me. believe that. if i ever get blessed to make in the writing scene trust me you will be seeing it live one day. cross your fingers. im so striving to be the next tyler perry.
     
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    I don't see nothing holding you back from achivement
    u can be bigger and better , like they say ......Just do it !
     
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    thanks for the inspiration love thanks!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    most welcome sunshine GA Peach
     
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