Quiet Poetry Lounge : What It's Like

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sevens_love, Sep 20, 2004.

  1. sevens_love

    sevens_love Active Member MEMBER

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    I'm not sure how I feel about this one. It just came to me.

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    What it’s like…

    It’s like…
    The trickling of soft rain as it slips down my face.

    It’s like…
    The crisp breeze that only a fresh autumn day can bring.

    It’s like…
    The warmth only felt nestled by the fire.

    It’s like…
    My heart jumps out of that crevice of darkness and begins to sing like I would for the one up Higher.

    It’s like…
    Confidence felt when it is ordained by the Father.

    It’s like…
    That mystic feeling upon first introduction.

    It’s like…
    Being caught up in a matrix that forces me to reconcile with all the theatrics.

    It’s like…
    My love for you lacks parameters and undoubtedly breaks the flow of iambic pentameters.

    It’s like…
    My cup is running over and instead of pouring into your lap I’m wanting it to shower down on your heart.

    It’s like…
    I want it to extend into your soul – committing itself to be a life changing force.

    It’s like…
    I need it to envelope you…to consume you like it has overpowered me.

    And I’m sitting here wondering what it’s [love] like for you.

    ~Seven 2004
     
  2. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's like I LIKE it a lot!! Nice poem!
     
  3. sevens_love

    sevens_love Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks love
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...........



    its like......



    its like....







    I realy like this poem :spinstar: .........



    keep writting Poet!



    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what it's like , like perfection of a poet this was very nice ..
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet...

    ...there is nothing that I can add to this,
    the poem speaks for itself..."Awesome"

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    Encore...Sage​
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    had to bring this butter smooth piece back up !
    just too sweet
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smooth indeed! This is just bangin.
     
  9. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow, not forced, you just let the pen flow freely and it worked well for you.