Black Poetry : What Is This ....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by herlove, Oct 18, 2002.

  1. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHAT IS THIS ....
    ETERNAL KISS, HEAVENLY BLISS

    IN ALL THING HE WOULD ASSIST
    TO MY LIFE ADD FLAVOR AN INTERESTING TWIST
    NOTHING ABSENT NEVER SHOULD I MISS
    UPON THE WELL'S OF UNCERTAINTY SHOULD I NOT DRAW NOR WISH

    WHAT IS THIS ....
    ETERNAL KISS, HEAVENLY BLISS

    I HAVE FOUND HIM, MY PRINCE
    SEEMS I'VE WAITED .... DREAMS ARE SEEN --- YOU COME FROM WHENCE
    HE'S CHARMING, NOT TO MENTION DEBONAIR ... MY PRINCE

    WHAT IS THIS ....
    ETERNAL KISS, HEAVENLY BLISS

    DANCE ABOVE THE URBAN SKIES
    TO HEIGHTS OF SPLENDER MY JOY WOULD RISE
    WE'D SHIMMER IN EACH OTHERS EYES
    NO MORE QUESTION OF WHYS
    SORROW NO IT EXIST NOT ... I FIND NOT WERE IT APPLIES

    WHAT IS THIS ....
    ETERNAL KISS, HEAVENLY BLISS
     
  2. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** ma---you knew i wus here all along-all u had to do was gimme da word!!!
    nah for real-i enjoyed this piece.......
    ya flow is on point and tha meaning is just beautiful...keep scribin w/
    dat poeticbliss........1;)
     
  3. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YA SEEKING AND SEARCHING TO FIND A LOVE ... SPECIAL KIND A LOVE THAT BINDS. I SENSE YOU ARE ONE THAT IS FULL OF JOY AND SHINE LIKE RAYS OF THE SUN. THANKS LURK YOUR RESPONSE BRINGS JOY TO MY HEART
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in wave of love
    from far above
    afloat i am
    in da mid twist
    from dis bliss
    da kiss from heaven
    i place upon yo soul
    hold u like my pot of gold
    as we roam da skies
    my domain
    i await da heavenly bliss
    of touch da embrace
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    lovin the reiteration

    keep writing poet

    welcome :wave:

    pd :)
     
  6. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its funny cause i acceditally clicked on your link

    great post glad i happend to come acrossed it
     
  7. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH AS ALWAYS U SEEM TO DEEPEN THE DEPTS OF WHAT I FEEL ... THANKS WITH MUCH LOVE AND LONELYPOET IT IS ALL IN THE PLAN, ALL IN THE PLAN LOVE KNOWS LOVE, INSPIRATION SEEKS INSPIRATION, AND SO FORTH AND POETDELIGHT THANKS FOR THE ENCOURAGEMENT