Quiet Poetry Lounge : What is this ! Da JRS files

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    How did i go from left to right
    blind to the facts and da light
    caught inside a crazy maze
    under da drunkin slumberin blaze
    searching for hope and my sanity
    inside this living formality
    like the creep in da night
    i can no-longer put up a fight
    mind under this cage of destruction
    ready for blastin explosion
    where da love and heart devotion
    is pitted into a fizzle corruption
    masked in da can of deception
    callin Bud / miller and da sud
    how can it be so everly dud
    in da handz of another
    disrespectful o' thee trouble
    now da mind wonder and wonder
    gut feeling like no other
    gotta wanna move forward
    yet making two steps backward
    standing wit nothing to gain
    crazy crazy going insane
    from da drama this life now brang
    tasting da bitterness and blood stain
    as i sit outlooking da pain
    in forgiviness but yet to claim
    i aim high to strike the final blow !
    :nuts:
    :sick: :injured: :em4600:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The one step forward, two steps back, shuffle. A dance I try not to do, but my feet seem to automatically dance sometimes. Sometimes we have to call upon a higher power, and ask for guidance from on high. You will find your way out of this maze brother.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    squeakin
    dancin
    twisted
    yet da
    maze
    holdin
    me
    prayer
    is all
    my
    soul
    can
    do
    maybe
    i'll
    be
    heard !

    Thankz sista and yes you right , sometime we have to seek a higher power
    to get pass da maze that seem to hold us in a stand still fizzle ................
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Brother $$RICH$$
    I do indeed understand the feeling you're
    releasing in this flow. I know I had to step back.
    Because I was going insane, and at times for got my name.
    But it's all good as your ink have express
    so clearly
    Much love to you brother
    feeling that understanding seriously

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes it can be a maze of crazy thangz going down....
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This Like a Hard flow

    Continue My $$RICH$$ Friend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    :toast: :whip:
     
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    so right like an hard core of pain and trouble more i wish for...sis
     
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