Black Poetry : What is the Truth?

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My future is on hold,
    Yet to be fulfilled
    The real deal, yet to be told,
    Where am I ? Locate me.
    Am I running away
    from the truth?
    Swallowing life every day
    while it's still unfolding?

    What is the truth?

    Is it what I know,
    or what you think
    is so.
    Is it what used to be,
    or what currently sets me free.
    Is it what I fight,
    or whatever gets me through the night.

    What is the truth?

    The truth is what has been all along,
    My captivating lyrics,
    Your mesmerizing song.
    Is this the duet
    I've been waiting for so long?

    What is the truth?
     
  2. black rose

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    now you know it in depth when you got others questioning thereselves, nice
     
  3. gempis

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    this topic has been on my mind lately too, watz. nice flow, feelin u
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    unto u da truth
    is within deep
    down forth one
    whom look in
    the mirror so be
    the truth

    it's not of what i think
    but what u know

    it's surely what's setting u free

    it's da fight and the part of da night
    together in one
    it's the song a duet
    of two whom belong
    singing da rapture
    of lyrical tune yet
    deep within da answer
    lay look into da mirror
    upon da face .....
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    once i was told...
    look within thy self
    and thy answer will be there...
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you're enjoying the flow black rose and gempis, thank you.

    True...Hopefully the true vision will be crystal. Thank you Rich and mzblkangel.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed as clear as day look deeper !
    da vision is da answer
     
  8. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel this.

    The more U look 4 it, the harder it is 2 find it.

    When U least expect it, the truth shows itself.

    Keep your 3rd eye clean & wide open.
     
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    nice drop
    feeling the flow .. hearing the song
    Peace
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is this the duet
    I've been waiting for so long?


    I love this line...and the flow as a whole...
    I'm always captivated by your writing...
     
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