Black Poetry : What is pain?

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  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What is pain?
    Is it dying?
    Is it crying?
    Is it fighting?
    Is it bleeding?
    Is it lying?
    Is it life?
    Is it family?
    Is it cuts?
    Is it deep slashes?
    Is it friends?
    Is it the heart?
    Is pain justified?
    Does it go away?
    Why must life defy me?
    Why must the feeling hurt?
    Can't you see?
    Can't you feel me for real?
    Can't you be there?
    Do you see the pain that haunts me?
    How could you?
    Aren't you blind?
    Don't you hear me?
    Do you not feel it?
    How?
    Why?
    How can you not understand?
    Why can't you be there?
    Life?
    Breath?
    Sight?
    Sound?
    Heart?
    Where is it?
    Do you know?

    One_Love
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya One...

    Emotions most def flowin' here!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One

    I can relate to ya emotion... keep droppin cause im checkin!

    Respect
    Reas
     
  4. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks. Sometimes I just feel like the world isn't hear. No sound or sight. Just me and arrogance.
    One_Love
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i think we all can relate to this..nice drop
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know i feel ya on dis sho nuff can relate to ya feelings here expressed
     
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    Pain is ..."Growth, in a nut shell"
     
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