Black Poetry : What is it?

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  1. POETIC BABI

    POETIC BABI Active Member MEMBER

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    What is it?


    The chills that runs thru my body when you touch me
    What is it?

    The electricity that takes hold of me when you kiss me ohhh so softly
    What is it?

    The look of intensity in your eyes just before you make love to me
    What is it?

    The wave of euphoria that rushed over me when you make me reach my ectasy
    _amn, What is it???

    Please , Please tell me
    What is it?
     
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    It seems to be all of the above..........everything that is the essence
    of that person.........nice flow!
     
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    What it is.. is adore. Very nice.
     
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    POETIC BABI Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Angelicsage!! This is the first poem that I have posted. Glad u liked it
     
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    Thanks to u 2 Hodee!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love and bond
    tyte scribe it the bite of love flowin through u ...:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    POETIC BABI Active Member MEMBER

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    THANKS RICH! I REALLY FEEL THE LOVE ON THIS SITE
     
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    indeed we happy u here to share ya wisdom upon us
    as we bond .....most welcome

    one big happy family !!!!!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

    WELCOME babi ;) :)

    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

    what is it for realz lol :)
     
  10. true love

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    It's TRUE LOVE! LOL. This poem was tight and said so much in so little words. Welcome too. LOL