Quiet Poetry Lounge : What is it !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I've watch from afar
    her written word
    her beauty in scribe
    her pen to canvas
    in motion
    yet she still don't hear me
    why! must i cry out so
    don't she feel me

    what is it !
    what is it !

    if she could only feel me
    she would know my heart
    what i have and where i been
    i wan't and lone to have her
    just in tyme a moment to share
    my mental thoughts

    what is it !
    what is it

    has i been cast out
    to be another face hidden
    a love un told
    a heart untouched
    a myth of affection to her mind
    am i for play
    or is it me wishing too hard

    what is it ????
    :eek:
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what is it I dunno but I do know that this is nice...
     
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    May be shes afraid. Maybe shes hurt deep. maybe she wants you too. maybe shes to weak.
     
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    i can't find the right wordz
    i can't seem to forget
    what is it !
    what is it !

    blind by da flow
    captured in rapture
    of her pen
    seem like my heart
    is jumping out
    what is it
    what is it !!

    how is it to be
    i wanna know thee
    where is she
    tell me
    tell me pleaseeeeeeeeee!

    coz i donno my self !

    thanks sista
     
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    neither do she
     
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    purple maybe she need me closer
    maybe her heart don't understand me
    what is it !
    what is it !

    as she dip in and out
    i watch her in written vibe
    i lone to touch
    i wish to caress
    what is it
    what is it !!!

    maybe she need my comfort
    maybe she need my faith
    inside me she stronger
    but why !
    why she won't open up
    be not afraid of me
    i am love compassionlly
    what is it !

    i never stop i wont quite i will keep on til she see
    what i am who i am and what my heart be
    soon very soon !

    thankz sis but i wanna know .. why???
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mesmerize her yummy,
    Then it will be sunny-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    indeed 1poet i'll try dat
    see if it work
    tyme to stir up da mix

    I know what it is !