Black Poetry : What Is It About U?

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What is it about u...
    I have days where I wanna b around u n no one else.
    I'm mad at the world n the only person I wanna talk 2 is u.
    I imagine ur here w/me, when I'm really missin u.
    I think about us kissin n all the possibilities it could lead up 2.
    All I want u 2 do is hold me in ur arms, n say u love me.
    Do u think about me like this?
    Would u ever b so bold 2 speak ur unspoken truths?
    U were the 1 I...
    Always told my problems 2,
    Told all my secrets 2,
    Who kept me laughin when cryin was all I wanted 2 do,
    Loved n still do.
    I know u love me n sh^! aint easy b/t us.
    But I need 2 know, do u get feelings like this?
    Like ur missin me so bad n u dont know what 2 do.
    The only thing that will calm ur nerves...
    Is lookin @ all those pics I sent u.
    So tell me baby, do u feel it 2?
    Da$!, what is it about u??
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, I hate this feeling, which you captured so well. Tight flow, this one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know dis da kind of feeling that come deep inside i feel u here
    ain't it a hard hiting one ! flow on express self
     
  4. sarcasm4eva

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    thanx for the love n support.this is what happens when ur used 2 bein around some1 for yrs, then it changes.and u dont know whether ur comin or goin.lol. much love :)
     
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    u know that's right i've been on this road before
    it change so fast and funny it even hurts
     
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    Yes, that feeling, hard to say exactly what it is, but it's something powerful. Well felt, I like this drop.
     
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    u took every single word out my mouth and wrote it down...if only u knew how much i can relate to this...tyte flow...
     
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    yeah sometimes i feel like this too.... but its like sometimes you are afraid to ask the other person if they feel the same.... cuz if they dont, then that leaves you rejected with all your cards on the table... nice write tho
     
  9. sarcasm4eva

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    watz-- thanx for readin me. ur comments r appreciated.

    lovely-- i know where ur comin from...i try 2 write things that everyone can relate too.

    brother love--think about this...its worse when u know they have the same feelings...they just wont say it to ur face.

    much love to all of u :)
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    understand the dilemma..this ..this...thang? which you
    expressed nicely...