Black Poetry : What is it??? ( A little play on words here)

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  1. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHAT IS IT??

    I can't help it, but lately
    I've been thinking about the times
    That I had you
    Maybe, it's due to the approaching
    warm weather,
    Since that was the last time
    We really were together

    Often, I remember, That hot summer night
    The manipulation of you in my hand
    In a motion upright

    And you wearing nothing
    But a conical wafer-like sheath
    Had me going down south on yah,
    With all lips...No never teeth

    Tongue flicking into action
    Getting every drop...as you began to drip
    Of your sweet,silky,smooth flavor
    First licking from the base
    To your very tip..

    That was another hot night
    while under a silvery full moon
    And I got a little freaky with yah
    As I started using a spoon

    I must admit, my chocolate love
    There had been others..When I couldn't have you

    THIS I WILL NOT HIDE

    Some were light versions, and others richer
    Than you may be
    It's my own obsession, that keeps me searching
    For that
    Creamy..smooth...ride

    But Now
    I've Cum to know, there is no other
    So, I intend to have you soon
    Perhaps...
    Maybe even tomorrow???

    Lips poised, and Yes
    Ready to swallow...

    What is it???
    (Answer to follow)
    all rights reserved-2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the time is soon .....the summer love
    is on arise...nice flow..............
     
  3. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK YALL!!

    The ANSWER IS>>>>>Chocolate ICE CREAM
     
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    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jyntl...

    This heah ice cream don't taste like any other flavour that I know...this here Smooth Creamy Chocolate Ride...is tougher than "Rocky Road"

    And all I wanna know is...where can a sustah get some a dat ...

    *cream* ;)

    Hunter
     
  5. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Richness,As always, thanx for the read!

    Hunter, Rocky Road was definitely the inspiration..
    If you'd like to know how to get your tongue, OOPS, I mean your hands on some, Try your local Super-Market..
    He's down aisle 9 ;+)
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jyntl,

    Enjoyed this fun and creative "play on words"!!! Good job!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  7. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    have you seen my tissues

    don't disturb me while i'm in the bathroom


    WOW
     
  8. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ, Thanx for taking the time to read
    I'm glad you could have fun in reading it,
    (I certainly enjoyed posting it!)
    --By the way, My hair is still trying to recover from your steamy post--LOL

    To the So-JA!!
    Come on outta that bathroom!
    (so as you don't miss the CREME DE LA CREME)
    Jyntl graciously thanx you for your reading

    ONE
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Itzallgood Jyntl,

    Since I helped destroy ya "doo", care ta have a brotha try his hand at a wash, condition, and set??? :laugh:

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ice cream, eh!

    amazing what they do with ice cream these days.:)
    WELCOME BACK, my friend.

    peace.
     
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