Black Poetry : What is going on..?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Jan 18, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One dj played these records Moved me...
    Second person played records.
    and Moved me .
    fooks keep giving me hints
    or signs but still dont know who is he?
    orther brothers and sisters kept telling me
    They are just Flirting G.....
    dont take it that seriuesly...
    But eventually They blame Me.!

    Last time nice brother Poet ..
    wanted to get to know me..
    and still dont know ..
    who is he.?
    said i,m gonna call you sweety....

    so i wait
    wait ..
    wait..
    wait..


    No not this time.....
    i,m done with this ryme
    cause always eventualy ...
    i,m misses crime?


    This it it...

    I,m Fed up with ****...


    Lord take care of this...
     
  2. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love dis here tyte drop
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    my sister
    nice drop very nice
    write them feelings out
    Peace and Love
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    LibertyLady....

    This is a very...very....very....nice poem. I'm happy you shared it with us.

    :thanks: Keep writing your raw emotions in poetic form...let it out...don't hold it in.

    :toast:
     
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