Black Poetry : what is dis

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    some foolish gunmen
    running round
    sniping at will
    set to kill anything
    he feel
    what is dis !?

    having the whole D.C
    in fear of some kind of
    bliss as they face
    da kiss of death
    in our own back yard
    and here we r headed
    to pick a fight elsewhere
    and we can't stop one
    sharpshooter
    ****
    what is dis !?

    how long can dis be
    when will dis land be free
    from da madness of some
    killing spree
    no clue
    only fear
    many tears run like da sea
    many heart lay in pain
    our own what a shame
    no name
    who 2 blame
    is it a act of fame
    or a justice one seek
    how da hell can dis be !?
    hit 11 souls so bold & cold
    left dead from bullets 2 da head
    now i'm sick of dis
    war on life
    mad as hell how we continue 2 fail
    no clue // no hope// no heart
    just a rush of hell upon dis earth
    judgement day will call
    dis day wrongdoers will fall
    no longer a game
    thou Father will claim da faith
    and give mercy upon da souls
    of love //peace & goodness
    how can dis be
    he still runs free
    not jumping state 2 state
    but a random stay in place
    in da VA. valley sniping targets
    of all races
    surely we need to stop and think
    coz dis one hits in a blink
    leaving no clue
    not even a reason
    what is dis //how can it be
    can't our nation see
    U
    S
    A
    need help !!
    a me ri ca
    dying slow under da shadows of death
    dis be crazy
    but a reality
    GOD BLESS THOSE in fear in all parts of VA.
    in prayer

    still my mind say what is dis how can it be!?
    :confused:
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U know what i'm saying, dat don't make no sense. Dat "think he play it off" sniper man is wasting his time, and he will go to jail sooner or later 4 a long *** time. He killin innocent victims and everythang, and its just too devastating. Nice topic rich.

    Aaliyahmonet:)
     
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    indeed whomever dis be
    *** will never be free
    it's a shame how he claim lives
    and crush hearts of innocent family
    will dis ever stop!!?
     
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    another one down a hard
    working man set for da day
    when da sniper headed his way
    hit one tyme down for da kill
    is dis his only thrill
    who can it be
    destroying so free
    who can dis be
    somebody talk to me....!?