Black Poetry : What Is Ain't (Not Placed)

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What is ain’t.
    What ain’t is.
    And this my mortal reality
    Is really spiritual myth.
    Friends and family
    were never really family and friend
    and mountain of achievement
    was really a failures ditch.
    Clean is dirty
    and dirty clean
    what is visible to my eyes
    is really unseen
    and my mind lost
    was actually never found
    and moms and dad
    never birthed me
    but spilled seed into Onan’s ground
    and this existence
    is really a shadowed glimpse
    eternity is a second
    and the second eternal bliss
    judgment isn’t in God’s hand
    but lies with man corrupt
    and the fallible infallible
    temporal, eternal
    celestial, terrestrial
    good is evil and evil good
    and absolute truth
    is fable myth
    and love be hate
    and hate be love
    and my birth an ejaculatory accident
    instead over predestination by my God
    if is ain’t
    and ain’t’ is
    then why do we even
    ……exist…..
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this here u just out done ya self here .....wow !!!
    i'm lovin every drop keep flowin
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    makes ya think too
    flow on
    diggin this one
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich and mzblack. the love is appreciated.
    k
     
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    Yo

    Very Nice K
    Havent had a chance to visit your room. But this drop is off the hook. Congrats again, on your move to poet extraordinary.

    :bowdown: Says the man when u come to his town. :D
     
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    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what it is and what it aint

    right on!! to the real.....
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was always a fan of your work this just made me even more a fan.....great job brotha....great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Yet another mystery of life, you have a way of digging to what seems like the bottom of your soul in your writing. Can't say any more...
     
  9. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brutha Hodee - Thanks so much for the praise. To whom much is given - much is required.
    k


     
  10. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sis!!!

     
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