Poetry Critiques : What is above the union of husband and wife

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by onewithman, Aug 22, 2005.

  1. onewithman

    onewithman Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 20, 2005
    Messages:
    5
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    What is above the union of husband and wife
    A union of such is a heavenly right
    So sweet a union of life
    A union void of friction and strife

    Oh, that’s a union blessed by The Most High
    Just the thought of such a union makes one cry
    To know your union is touch in such a way
    Will forever eliminate the need to pray

    What is above the union of husband and wife
    A union considered to be an exclusive right
    Joined at the head and hip, connected by the power of love
    Discharged in a single stream of might
    Awe, sweet heaven of pleasures and delight
    Such a union worthy of restoring a blind man’s sight

    A union bringing the strongest man down to his knees
    And a humble man smiling with glee
    Such a union this is, even the enemy of God is pleased

    Who can separated God’s union of husband and wife
    Woe to the surgeon using his finest surgical knife
    For what God put together, let no man put asunder
    Or you shall hear Mother Nature’s warning
    Going into her bag of wonders …
    Releasing the sounds of thunder

    What is above the union of husband and wife
    Why there is no math that can calculate such a height
    Silencing the words of mortals impressed
    Leaving them to make a shape or outline in the air
    So looked upon it causes ones to stare

    Wow God’s union of husband and wife
    Is a union destined for a blissful life
    What is above the union of husband and wife
    A light that shines so bright
    Dispelling the darkness in the night

    What is between the union of husband and wife
    Space and opportunity for the rest of your life!
     
  2. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 8, 2005
    Messages:
    577
    Likes Received:
    5
    Ratings:
    +7
    Nice poem onewithman!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    very nicely done , this poem is awesome and need no changes
    as i see it .....
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - above union husband
  1. TotalView
    Replies:
    8
    Views:
    356
  2. Lrae

    Black Astrology : As above

    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    781
  3. Clyde C Coger Jr
    Replies:
    8
    Views:
    977
  4. Afru Shukuwr
    Replies:
    47
    Views:
    3,863
  5. $$RICH$$
    Replies:
    4
    Views:
    599