Black Poetry : WHAT IF?......

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What if Adam and eve hadn't takin dat bite from the forbidden tree?
    would life have been so right
    What if we didnt have the jeans of sin flowing through our vines wit
    nonstop?
    would our bodies not have drop into ashes becuz of death?
    i kno questions of dis mite live a soul out of breath

    or what if blood wasnt sheded more than tears
    would more people still be living for another day, another chance

    what if there was no crime
    would there still be a time

    or what if my mother didnt grow up wit less love and attention
    would I have got more affection as a little gurl
    instead of being abandant and ignored, leavin me full of hate

    would i be able to love till dis date of day?

    what if my father hadnt told me such lies
    would i be able to trust

    or what if my bratha wasnt takin drugs or treatin me da way he does now
    would i still be able to look at him without anger in my eyez?
    what if drugs were never introduced to us
    would we still be able to be seduced?

    or what if we didnt have many accidental pregnacys
    would there still be a lot of reproduces?

    I say God so loved the world that he gave us his only begotten son

    and we so hate the world that we killed our only forgotten son

    but i say what if god didnt?

    what if we didnt?

    they say Jesus so loved the world that he died 4 us on the stake but not the cross

    and now i say, our sons as human beins so hate the world killed themselves
    becuz of the stress and depression

    but wut if dis didnt happen?

    kinda makes u wonda, doesnt it

    would life have been more betta?


    dedicated to the confused souls (c)

    :confused:
     
  2. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow... That's all I can say.
    One love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what if ...deep often unanswered and mental mind can't understand
    question only thy Father knows da answers too.......tyte heavy yet mindful piece
     
  4. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STANK U MY BRATHA RICK 4 DA KIND WORDS

    STANK YA MY BRATHA SKRYBBLE 4 SHOWIN ME SUM LUV
    AND I WISH U CUD SAY MO SINCE DATZ ALL U CAN SAY ...LOL
    NAW JP



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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow im feeling this what if. man to be able to be just lived forever would have been perfect. but to know that they lived to be in the nine hundreds wow that was amazing to. love the concept gurl do flo on.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank ya my sistah nevar 4 the kind words and appreciation
    i do respect dat, and i will flo on, cuz u kno me....lol




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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ghetto Ambition you doing it big. Them some heavy what if and I love the food for thought. This was a T-Bone and I'm keep knawing on yo fantastic flow!
     
  8. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank ya poet (koolaid smiling)
    i really do appreciate da luv
    and much luv 2 ya poet as well


    blackluv and bp