Black Poetry : What if?

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  1. Miss_EducateU

    Miss_EducateU Member MEMBER

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    what if
    I had the audacity
    and tenacity
    to love You
    thoroughly without
    complexity
    would You let Me?
    what if I could lose You
    in sights and
    ride you like bikes and
    submerge you in
    nights
    would You let Me?
    what if I said it simply and
    plain i wanna obtain
    your name and
    quit playing these games
    would You let Me?
    what if I wanted to
    just love and forgive
    just love you and live and
    give you keys to my crib
    would You let Me?
    what if I kissed you and fled?
    what if I warmed your bed
    kissed you on the head and
    repeat all that you've said
    would You let Me?
    would You let Me let You inside
    let Me relinquish my pride and
    no longer hide
    would You let Me?
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes!
    I would let u into my heart
    ride the compassionate wave
    from the depth of my soul
    yes!
    on this journey of light
    where love is right i will allow u
    yes!
    ever so sweet intently i would
    caress the cares u lone to share
    with no game or worries of shame
    softly whispers i call upon ya name
    yes!
    with no doubt da keys to da crib
    is da key to da heart
    inside i would lay in comfort
    and sho u where it all starts
    yes!
    I would let u .....as i continue to welcome u
    within da flowz of destee's poetic showz
    yes !
    i will allow u dis as i cherish ya vibe
    as across my heart dis u scribe
    yes step inside da love maze
    of my heart............simply yes!
     
  3. Miss_EducateU

    Miss_EducateU Member MEMBER

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    Oh!!! Thank you....I couldn't have had a better welcome while I am getting back into the flow of thangs.
     
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    Educate da heart of love from above
    in honors of thee i welcome thee openly
    ya flowz is sweet a tasty treat keep scribing dear one
    ya most welcome .......$R
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mis_EducateU... this was so off tha hook...
    why did you ever stop? :spinstar:
     
  6. Miss_EducateU

    Miss_EducateU Member MEMBER

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    Wild....my life is a new whirlwind. Besides I was inspired by "if i could drink this poem".
    Thank you, Soul Sistah!
     
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    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked it, Miss Educate. keep doing what you do, because you're good at it.
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reading these words makes my heart flutter. So very beautiful.
    You've got a lovely mind, sister, pen on.
     
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    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very nice!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what if? this piece here was priceless..."just love and forgive/just love you and live..."
    that was niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! keep flowing queen.