Black Poetry : What If The Rose Changed Its Color?

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  1. jdj530

    jdj530 Active Member MEMBER

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    Wht if the rose changed its color to white instead of red?
    Or what if the violet changed its color to pink insted of purple?
    Or what if the lily changed its color to orange instead of white?
    Or what if they changed the color of the world to pink and purple instead of blue for the ocean and brown for the land?
    What if all the colors of everything changed to a different color everyday instead of its normal color?
    Just what if all this really happened?Just what if?What if?
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is great. Then others would stand as I do today. looking and answering the questions. I would stand as them and see how I treat the other.
     
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    it would change the mood of a heart
    it would show it's beauty of race
    it would allow the sparkle to shine
    the multi colors would change a few minds

    it would give a ray of hope
    it would allow us see faith
    it would beam a colors of rainbows
    it would be nice to see da change
    and wake up mental brains
    it would stop da black & white clash
    and da change would come to pass
    but what if !?
    is the key

    nice twist of flow to show da world and put a play on da mental mind of what if .......i like dis
     
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    thanx everybody who rplied to my poetry
     
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    yes so true
    your words of thought
    what if is one of the
    biggest issue
    we deal with always
    i like your scribe
    and i like the thought
    as i think WHAT IF
    Peace
     
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    i like this and what rich said nice flow
     
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    this is a very nice flow of words and mind wonder
    rich with thoughts to dwell on.


    thanks for sharing
     
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    gurl, u is on fiyah!!! :hot:
    i loved it,
    much love,
    -story
     
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    most welcome the what if is mindful and makes da mental wonder
     
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    looks like everyone is noticing you !!! :wink:

    great work Sister :toast:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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