Black Poetry : What I WANT

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by EXpressurself, Jan 16, 2004.

  1. EXpressurself

    EXpressurself Active Member MEMBER

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    What I want...
    Hot kisses caressing my face
    Kneading of flesh below my breast
    Small murmurs of satisfaction
    Shifting of weight in anticipation
    Your eyes wide watching my reaction
    My eyes shut memorizing your touch.
    What I need...
    Shifting of hands from east to west
    Rustling of clothing as we undress
    Snapping of bra straps, tugging of panties
    Your mouth on mine open wide
    Tongues dancing at a rhythmic pace
    Skin greeting skin, sweat entwined.
    What I love...
    The excess weight placed on mine
    Mouth roaming to exotic locations
    grabbing of sheets, pulling of hair
    Feeling slowly filled to capacity
    Hips bucking to dance with hips
    Reggae, salsa, R&B.
    What I have...
    You becoming one with me
    Me surrendering completely to you
    Anticipating your every move
    No regrets, only contentment
    Promises of more to come.
    What I see...
    Is me always getting what I want.
     
  2. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope you get what you want. You making me mucho caliente just reading this. It caught my attention from beginning to end.
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who wouldn't want this! much love to you for this piece, it's burning up fo' sho'!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed u can get it too
    dis was hot and yummy
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was on fire, not doubt about that.
     
  6. angelicsage

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    there was some :hot:
    beneath these words
    this piece was blazin...
    emotive writing...
    basking in the vibe