Black Poetry : what i want....is somethin' more

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  1. renae

    renae Active Member MEMBER

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    what i want is something more
    something more than my body pressed against yours
    somethin' more than you goin' up and down
    and you hittin' it from da front and back and all around.
    i want more than a measely body merge
    or hear your orgasms surge
    i want a merging of our minds
    not just our body. i want to look into your eyes
    and experience a love transference..i stare beyond in2 ur soul
    i seel the real u...uninhibited...as we become whole...

    what i want is somethin' more than one way conversations
    i want somethin that resembles intellectual relations
    on world topics, our black community, somethin' on US
    i want somethin more than you bein' in a rush
    once the conversation doesn't drift your way.
    i want somehtin' more than you walking away
    after your male and sexual ego have been satisfied.
    in public you disclaim me, but in the bedroom, "you're mine."

    what i want is for you 2 b a man
    i don't want for you to b afraid to hold my hand
    i want you 2 give me light kisses
    for no reason at all and soft caresses
    in public just b/c you wanna show ur affection
    and that means more than your erection.

    what i want....is somethin more than u've yet 2 give me..

    ~Renae~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now i feel u
    coz something more then a thrill
    but pure affectionin whole .....
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it don't get no deeper than this,
    give him your soul.
    not just pleasure,
    if with him--you want to grow old.
    all of the passion,
    makes things feel good.
    but in the end,
    you don't get what you should.
    you long for his touch,
    from his soul--not hand.
    you want him to fill you,
    but not with excitement from a man.
    you long for more,
    than what he has given.
    you want him to become your life,
    so that you can see that life is worth livin.
    all i can say,
    is that it's time for a change.
    i'm not speaking about him,
    i won't say a name.
    if you don't change,
    then who will?
    what is his presence worth,
    if your soul--he doesn't feel????????(i dig your poem)(add me)[email protected]
     
  4. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, i know...We all been there or at least seen i happen to anotha. Tell it like it is...

    I'm just sayin...:heart:
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tell me about it!!!

    girl, been there done that, they walk off thinking they done you some good, but its just the way round. They only know how to do the horizontal mambo...


    I'm just sayin!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    some men have been conditioned by some women that sex is enough.
    these women have set low standards and the men aren't going to give more
    if they don't have to. When they come against women with higher standards
    they will either come correct or exit and step to a woman who will accept less.
    It's not fair, but necessary for women to set the standards in a ralationship... unless she's blessed to stumble across a man who believes in doing the right thing.

    I enjoyed your poem.
    Thanks for sharing. :)

    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    Renae, yeah girl we have all been there, your poem is on the money 4sho. Keep flow'n
     
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    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can really feel this. it's like breakin' it down and giving it to him straight, no holding back. this is my exact state of mind. i'm tired of n!ggas coming at me like that. i want more than just a booty call. especially at a time like this, i want l-o-v-e.
     
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