Black Poetry : What I thought was a flower !

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jun 9, 2006.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    He gave me life
    a flower as wife

    I didn't understand
    until i looked in my hand

    As the petals was mold
    Beauty started to unfold

    Compassionate love
    uncovered a hug hub

    Her eyez was like da sun
    so bright and devine

    Her worth i looked upon
    the depth of one

    deep to da core i saw much more
    where as man , i de 'vor

    Inside was loyality and cares
    outside was understanding she bares

    A fruitful heart blossoming
    a love blooming wit compassion

    I knew then only thy father's gift
    was as pure and real, so dearing

    I now treasure it
    hold her close to my heart

    through thy visions and feelings
    what i thought was a flower
    was true love unfolding before me
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 19, 2005
    Messages:
    3,872
    Likes Received:
    134
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    working to own my plus size empire.....
    Location:
    I'm a Georgia Peach!!!!
    Ratings:
    +135
    rich can i marry you i promise it will be worth ya time. and i aint talking bout bedding ya either. there's so much more than me ryding out honey. just kidding love simply beautiful simply beautiful.:smooch: :smooch: :smooch: :welldone:
     
  3. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 13, 2006
    Messages:
    1,261
    Likes Received:
    206
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Teacher
    Location:
    Somewhere between paradise and diaster
    Ratings:
    +229
    :hearts3:I think that this was nice flo as usual. I think I'm in love with you pen. LOL:hearts3:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    Nevar............
    meet me at the alter sweety
    thank u so much for the love & visit

    Asimplepoet...........
    I so loveth thee from thy ink my heart spray
    unto canvas what thy tongue miss or mess up
    thank u so much for the warmth and love u give.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    What else can I say--absolutely beautiful!
     
  6. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 2, 2006
    Messages:
    1,915
    Likes Received:
    53
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +55
    Beauty keeps dripping from your pen.

    I really enjoyed the read.
    Much Luv
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    Thank u watz just like you honey .....

    Thank you so much for giving such warm kind love 4EVERLUV


    I'm happy y'all enjoyed what my mind created through da feelings ...
     
Loading...